- PantsThatSplitAreLit2
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Did anyone read it?
Fri Jan 15, 2021 10:03 pm
Not to be a bother but did anyone read my story yet?
Re: Did anyone read it?
Sat Jan 16, 2021 12:09 am
I read it, it's interesting. I like the fantasy, almost naughty Enid Blyton style to it, I can see how it could easily become a series. That did lead to some confusion though as you didn't explain whether it's meant to be completely unreal, or more a hidden part of the real world, one of the characters was described as an elf and another was suddenly a "thiccbot"? Nothing wrong with any of your ideas, it just threw me a bit because I suddenly wasn't sure exactly what I was reading.
- PantsThatSplitAreLit2
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Re: Did anyone read it?
Sat Jan 16, 2021 12:51 am
That's fair haha, the cast is just a bunch of female characters from shows I'm very fond of.
For example, Thiccbot is in reference to Jenny from My Life as a Teenage Robot, haha
For example, Thiccbot is in reference to Jenny from My Life as a Teenage Robot, haha
- PantsThatSplitAreLit2
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Re: Did anyone read it?
Sat Jan 16, 2021 12:57 am
And if any of you have story ideas you'd like me to write about, I'd be happy to take requests!
Re: Did anyone read it?
Sat Jan 16, 2021 10:05 pm
Okay, maybe a little note explaining who everyone is for those less familiar? I didn't recognise any of them. I did recognise a probably intentional nod to the Railway Children, though?
- pantsthatsplitarelit
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More Ladies and Locomotives Context
Sat Jan 16, 2021 10:12 pm
Fair enough, I'll be sure to post which characters from which shows I intend to use. (For example, Laurel the Elf Lady is meant to be Laurel from the movie Onward.)
And the locomotives aspect of the stories come from the fact I watched a lot of Thomas the Tank Engine as a kid. Since the original model series had sets that were very calming and gentle to look at, I thought a calm, gentle setting would fit my series well. The trains just add a little bit more of my personality, I guess.
And the locomotives aspect of the stories come from the fact I watched a lot of Thomas the Tank Engine as a kid. Since the original model series had sets that were very calming and gentle to look at, I thought a calm, gentle setting would fit my series well. The trains just add a little bit more of my personality, I guess.
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- Sapphire:3
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Re: Did anyone read it?
Sat Jan 16, 2021 10:41 pm
I thought the story you put up was pretty good!
- pantsthatsplitarelit
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Re: Did anyone read it?
Sat Jan 16, 2021 10:42 pm
Thanks Sapphire! I'm writing the next on people as we speak
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