Did anyone read it?

Not to be a bother but did anyone read my story yet?

I read it, it's interesting. I like the fantasy, almost naughty Enid Blyton style to it, I can see how it could easily become a series. That did lead to some confusion though as you didn't explain whether it's meant to be completely unreal, or more a hidden part of the real world, one of the characters was described as an elf and another was suddenly a "thiccbot"? Nothing wrong with any of your ideas, it just threw me a bit because I suddenly wasn't sure exactly what I was reading.

That's fair haha, the cast is just a bunch of female characters from shows I'm very fond of.

For example, Thiccbot is in reference to Jenny from My Life as a Teenage Robot, haha

And if any of you have story ideas you'd like me to write about, I'd be happy to take requests!

Okay, maybe a little note explaining who everyone is for those less familiar? I didn't recognise any of them. I did recognise a probably intentional nod to the Railway Children, though?

Fair enough, I'll be sure to post which characters from which shows I intend to use. (For example, Laurel the Elf Lady is meant to be Laurel from the movie Onward.)

And the locomotives aspect of the stories come from the fact I watched a lot of Thomas the Tank Engine as a kid. Since the original model series had sets that were very calming and gentle to look at, I thought a calm, gentle setting would fit my series well. The trains just add a little bit more of my personality, I guess.

I thought the story you put up was pretty good!

Thanks Sapphire! I'm writing the next on people as we speak